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Overall I enjoyed making this little animation because I was able to focus on one of the aspects of Dante's Purgatorio. I recommend the book to anyone that hasn't read it yet. I tried to keep the coding simple and the animation to a minimum. Didn't want to overwork myself. The hard part was basically making frame by frame for a lot of it in Illustrator so it could have a particular style. I added different subtle effects on the second scene but I don't know if it will show up. One thing I just found out was that the fonts on the computer wasn't the same as the one of my computer so some of my text is messed up. I can just re upload the file later with the corrections.
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I wouldn't of known to click around in the sky to get there. ??? Im pretty bad at computer games anyways.
Very random and interesting. Only thing I can suggest is to work on the interactivity aspect, parts of it are a bit unclear as what to do or why.
I does look like a unified composition. Very finished. I have not read the book, but the flash is entertaining. All of the little details are nice as well. Consider (if you have a message), the best way to explain the content of the book to the user if the user has not read the book. I read it kind of as this entity passing on to the next life, but perhaps i'm thinking too hard. =P
interesting looking little tid bit.
its so attractive im afraid it left me wanting more though
I was playing this, and because I didn't know where to click and drag, I was having a bit of trouble. The color palette is very easy to follow, being black and white, but also that the elements change making it interesting too. I found it to be very fun, but I wasn't familiar with content of the book. I think maybe making the interactions a bit more specified could help the user. Overall, very nicely presented. Nice red glow to your angel in the end.
Aesthetically the piece looks tight.
I would make the cues to get from one place from another slightly easier to find.
This is a pretty cool animation, but really hard to figure out how to navigate. but I kind of enjoy that quality, but it definitely took me a bit to figure out what was going on.
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